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Duke's 'Poetry'

Try as I might to disguise whatever useless excuse for writing I put on here as Poetry, I will invariably fail. But in the spirit of putting effort into at least something, here you go.




1~ One-Track Mind
These words are illusion,
Delusions - a simple space-age fusion -
The power we harness but never truly witness,
A spectral wish, a
whispered kiss -
Lying,
Our secret torment -
Their open salvation.
A broken scream in the night of life,
We mumble regrets, we
cry our pardons.
Let almighty hell be our auspicious inventor.
(Let the heavenly Might be our disgusted 'maker.)
Meet we them as our only selves -
Entrust them us with the sinful desired.
Away from all precocious manner -
We slip.






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2008-12-24 [Chimes]: *cough* Daily Poem *cough* :]

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: Hahaha XD You are a strange one, Memz-Face. This poem sucks mightily. But it wouldn't kindly exit my head.. XD So there you go. ;)

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: I like it. ^^

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: Hehe XP Well you would. XD Can't YOU put it up there, then? ;)

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: Um... I'm not sure. *goes to read the rules*

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: Haha!~~

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: Well... Lin says if I have your permission or if you request the help :P Then, yes.

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: Hahaa.. Well, you have my permission. As for help requesting, I don't understand. X_____X Perhaps I need help with that.

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: Well... some people don't know how to edit wikis XD

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: .......... Well., fair enough. :P Memz-Face.. I don't know how to edit wikis. D:

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: XD Clearly!
It is done. :P

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: :O I knowz! D:
:D Fur reelz? I sees. :) Danke.

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: Welcome. :)
You're too modest by the way... you're a good poet. ^^

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: :)
Aha! Modesty doesn't come into it. :) But thank you all the same. :P I find my 'poetry' to be rather bland, myself. XD

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: This one is so not bland! It's got all of its imagery... And the cool rhyming thing, as well as the lack of rhyming. :D Parts of it sound Shakespeare-esque. ^^

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: (I love that you can actually spell 'esque'. :P)
Ooohhh but what does it mean!? *waves arms mysteriously* :P
Hehe which parts? oO

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: (It has 'que' at the end, of course I can... you know my love of words ending in 'que'. 'Masque' for example. :P And it bugs me when certain people can't. XD)
Well... it means whatever you want it to mean. :P *meaning I can't be bothered to analyse* XD
This bit:
'Let almighty hell be our auspicious inventor.
(Let the heavenly Might be our disgusted 'maker.)
Meet we them as our only selves -
Entrust them us with the sinful desired.'

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: (I definitely know what you mean. ;) You do have a certain love for those words. ;) No matter how often I correct people on that spelling, they completely ignore it. -.-)
Heh XD I wouldn't want to either. ;)
Awhh well danke. :D XD I don't quite see it, but if you think so... XP

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: :D I love them.
Yes, people can be stubborn when they think they're right. XD
XD
I think it's because of 'auspicious' and 'meet we them'.

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: :D
Hahaha Yes. Well, people need to learn to be more open minded. XD Haha. :P
Aha! Well, I can see slightly more now. XD Okay~

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: They do! Like us. :D Our minds are so open... they don't even EXIST!
Seeeee! I'm not mad.

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: Certainly not! You are as sane as a Riding Whip.
'Cause those are like.., crazy-sane.

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: I AM a Riding Whip. XD

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: Exactly! That's why my statement was completely nonsensical!

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: AHA!

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: Quite!

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: Bweeeeeee. Do you have any mooore?

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: Poetry? Nein. xD

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: WRITE MORE!

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: Effort.. D: I have to write this app. :(

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: That's true. XD

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: D: *wails and flails* I think.. I am settling for narrative form.

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: YAY! We like narrative. :]

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: Who doesn't? ;)

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: Boring people.

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: Well quite! I've tried to refrain from using *twitch* third person.. As I hate it. It bugs me that how I am writing is so much like it though. >.> I may change it. XD

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: Show me? :D

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: Nein! >:O Not until I have more than half a paragraph. XD

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: Alright XD

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: :D XD

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: I need food...

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: So do I... *wanders off to make a very healthy crisp sandwich*

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: Hmmm

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: ... *Didn't make one* D: *Was sucked in by tea instead* Wth?!

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: XD Always the tea. XD

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: I know. D: And now it's gone! X____x
Also.. I feel compelled to update/say goodbye to my site. :O

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: Then do so?

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: I am. :O I just messaged myu host for about the third time, asking her to delete my site. D:<

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: Ah. XD She's not very reliable...

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: Fucking isn't. >:(
Very angry. Because I don't want to have a new site ready to go up, before that one is deleted. >.>

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: Ah, yeah. >.<;

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: I mean... FFS. Does she even READ it!? I emailed her too. >.>

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: Maybe she's away somewhere?

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: Nope. She's still editing her site. It's been edited TODAY! D:<
Also.. I am just putting up this banner as my site. XD With a cbox.. Maybe. And a short explanation.
http://elftown.eu/stuff/CLOSEDBAN.png

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: Ah, fair enough. :]

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: :) Think it'll get the message across? XD

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: I do!

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: :) I'll show you the full file in a minute. I'm very irritated though. D: It won't log me into FTP. >.>

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: Then maybe she's deleted it... but the hosting service hasn't gotten round to wiping it yet?

2008-12-25 [Duke Devlin]: Nah, turns out the server - Paradehosting - was moving. And she (look on my site comments before it vanishes) neglected to tell me. She seems pretty narked in her last message. But fuck her.

2008-12-26 [Chimes]: Yeah, she did. O.o Her loss.

2008-12-28 [Duke Devlin]: Yeps. >:) I need to check if it's gone now. XD

2008-12-28 [Chimes]: I was going to... but I got distracted XD

2008-12-28 [Duke Devlin]: IT'S GONE. ^^

2008-12-28 [Chimes]: :)

2008-12-28 [Duke Devlin]: :O Finally, eh? ;) Whatcha get distracted by?

2008-12-28 [Chimes]: Manipping... but it isn't going so well... and LocoRoco... XD

2008-12-29 [Duke Devlin]: Oh dear... XD Muppet. :P
:D

2008-12-29 [Chimes]: It's funnnn. :P

2008-12-29 [Duke Devlin]: Sureee~~~
I tell you I got a graphics tablet? :D

2008-12-29 [Chimes]: Nope, but you said it on Bob's Diner... so I knew :)
Draw me something cool? :D

2008-12-29 [Duke Devlin]: Ace. :D Aren't you observant? ;)
Oh yes. :D I'll draw YOU. ^^

2008-12-29 [Chimes]: Yes, yes I am. :P I only really pay attention when you comment though. XD

I'm something cool? XD

2008-12-29 [Duke Devlin]: Haha XD Well that's a good way of doing things. *is vain* ^^
Why yes! :O I actually already did, for a Meme, that I have yet to upload. XD

2008-12-29 [Chimes]: It is!

OOOO! AWESOME ME WANTS TO SEE! GO UPLOAD!

2008-12-29 [Duke Devlin]: :O
It isn't that good. XD I'll do it later. :P I'm currently trying to draw the Pixie-Fred. :)

2008-12-29 [Chimes]: You'll have to show me that one too. :P

2008-12-29 [Duke Devlin]: Well I would, but you see, the computer decided to crash, when I was colouring his hair. Only then did I realise that I had yet to fucking SAVE. D: :(
*cries* D: HUG ME. D:

2008-12-29 [Chimes]: *biiiiig hug*

Mine did that when I was manipping once! DX

2008-12-29 [Duke Devlin]: *Glompage* D:
It sucks! D: *glompage* Why do computers hate us so!?

2008-12-29 [Chimes]: Because we displease them... >.> DX

2008-12-29 [Duke Devlin]: How so!? D: I am so loving.... D: DX

2008-12-29 [Chimes]: I don't know... never do they tell their secrets...

2008-12-29 [Duke Devlin]: It's cause they are mean. >.>

2008-12-29 [Chimes]: It is! They shall surely smite us for that.

2008-12-29 [Duke Devlin]: They will. :( *saddened*

2008-12-29 [Chimes]: *hugs for dear life*

2008-12-29 [Duke Devlin]: D: *wails and flails*

2008-12-29 [Chimes]: Awwwh!

2008-12-29 [Duke Devlin]: Ahhh well... D:

2008-12-29 [Chimes]: *prances around*

2008-12-29 [Duke Devlin]: I dont' think you did.

2008-12-29 [Chimes]: I would have. :P

2008-12-29 [Duke Devlin]: Pmph. I think you lie.

2008-12-29 [Chimes]: I do not!

2008-12-29 [Duke Devlin]: Okay. =3

2008-12-29 [Chimes]: *grin*

2008-12-29 [Duke Devlin]: :D

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